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just a short fight.
i tried frame by frame for the first time. short movie because i didn't have THE big story. so i animated some old drawings i used to make in the past.
oh yeah, and i also use the Vcam. not bad.
Audio made with Fruity Loops.

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Not bad.

Good job not using stick characters; that's what really ruin a lot of beginners. Keep animating full characters, slowly trying to make them even more detailed, and keep practicing. The "animation" aspect - i.e the camera, the pacing, the easing, the story - was great, it's just the art that could use work (which is my problem too - I'm a terrible artist). Just keep practicing and you'll be a pretty good animator so long as you stay away from sticks and keep FBF'ing.

needs a tad bit more work

as said before, more work, more sound, more interaction

...okaaaaaay...

Funny, wholesome, entertainment lol. The swearing seemed a bit out of place, but that made it all the more funny...

sort of short, but entertaining anyway.

hmm

there could have been some sound effects and the song better. and also use speech not text.

a little to short.

it could have been way longer and you should have either made a better story or just make it non stop action.

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Aug 7, 2007
10:18 AM EDT