It's a start
Looks alright, but there's room for improvement. Hope to see more from you as you go along!
Author Comments
I knw its already been up but i have added a hell of a lot more stuff to this including musicit has taken me about a week to produce on and off, it is all fbf and at 16 fps with 581 frames. please review and leave me helpful criticism about my work. thanks for watching Benno.
Keep Workin'
Its nice to see some one learning flash.
Pointers: If you intend to draw something that is like a square, people expect sharp edges and angles. Try to sharpen things up and it will look tighter and not so haphazardly done.
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- Aug 6, 2007
- 7:01 PM EDT