Music this time: Zelda
Why do you insist on putting popular music in your flashes that everyone will know isn't original?
It's just distracting for people who are trying to figure out your nonexistent storyline.
The animation itself isn't half bad, but the plot makes little to no sense.
You should have had a better reason for the first guy to die, and what was up with the random cameos?
I can see where you going with most of it, but you failed to follow it through creatively.