i am sorry but you had misspeled words and a horbbile storyline not to mention it was bad animation i think you can do better you need more effort
To compensate for the bad visuals and horrible storyline, use voicing instead of text.
Not Too Bad
Story was a bit difficult to follow, but overall good concept, kept practicing.
Man I keep taking chances with movies that aren't green or blue and I'm always dissapointed.
Thats not a review fatboy/.
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I like this style of animation. I had no idea what was going on, and would have really liked some more music and sound effects during the movie. Also, I agree with the previous poster about taking out the 'continue' buttons, they are annoying. I was going to give this a '5', but you used my name in the video, so that's bonus points.