It needs work....alot of work.
your starts seem to sudden and random. it all kind of makes sense if you have seen any other shorts. i think ive seen one. its all so random and well wierd. it be cool if you had something like a series that shows something of waht your talking about not just a random section of animation.
A Good Example
I wish more people made movies like this.
They are short, and get to the point, they dont waste our time with horrible horrible movies, but still give us something to look at.
Not a great movie, but one worth making, and one worth watching!
I thought the style of animation was pretty cool, but the whole thing, I think could be improved. I could barely hear the two guys, even after turning my volume waaay up, and also, I know it DOES say "quickie", but i think it should've been longer.
But, like I said, I like that animation. :D
When you said short quickie you wasn't kidding! That's the shortest flash I've seen so far! The ending was really funny. XD