good but bad
YOu graphics are a bit good, but there's no sound ):
I don't realy understand the writtings in red and i dont understand the story. But, if you can put sound and change writting on black page, i'd rate it 4 or 5, but now, this worth 3
Author Comments
I created this for my ancient history class, And yes I know It has shortcomings; such as the lack of sound and shortness. Those are based upon the deadline in which I had to get this done for, So enjoy whats there and tell me what you think.
las guys post was right
historically innacurate. it was more like 300 elite spartans with 10k greek warriors from various parts of the country, fending off a attack of 300k persians. the sea battle is true 800 or so persian ship against 200+ greek ships. in the end 300 spartans and maybe 1k greeks stayed behind as leonitis sent the other greeks to fight another day. this united a country and pretty much saved democracy in it's infant stages.
its ok
historically innacurate....no sound. Its on the right track though.
Sry u cant get a pass from me if there's no audio
the story was quite good as were the drawings, but i cant pass a movie that has absolutly no audio!! I can uderstand that you cant put voice overs, thats fine lots of good flashes dont. But you need some background music!!! its not hard to find just go to the audio portal download a song you like and import it to your movie. As simple as that. Why dont you do that and resubmit it.
Missing half
Just like you said, you need to add sound and fix the spelling/grammar errors. This will get a better score if you do. Other than that, good stuff, but as is, it feels like you're missing half of the flash without the sound.