good stuff
keep developping your skills id love to see an improved version of this same type of thing
Author Comments
Hi, I'm Brian, I'm 12 years old and this is my second sprite movie, don't vote a zero just because I did somthing like proxicide.
For you people who have been thinking I stole proxicide's, movie, I infromed him of this movie, I'm not trying to steal , I'm just trying to make movies and show people I can make flash movies, I just wanted to make a movie of two VG characters fighting each other, so would you people stop criticizing me of how i stole it, because I didn't I put hard work into this.
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it seems ppl r giving u low scores i'll give u a ten cuz the fighting was good mk characters fighting stances r hard to do cuz their feet stay exactly the same but the rest of their body moves its a real payne but yea the ending was funny n i like scorpion n sub zero so yea
Good, and in some ways better then your first
but, in other ways you went backwards
Graphics: 85/100
The graphics were better then your first sprite animation, but sprite is still sprite.
Audio: 80/100
Some backround music in the introductions would have been nice, either that your use actual voices. Really you did not use backround music as effectually as before. However, you are still using your sound effects well; so, keep that up.
Story: 40/200
You have a story this time, but it could use some more depth to it. Also, you should be thinking of some way of how you can contribute to this genre, be innovative. I understand you are still working to improve your flash skill, but I think you have enough talent to where you can make your own sprite movie where people will copy off of you instead of you copying off of them. Do something no one has ever thought to do with sprite animations.
Replay value: 25/100
Some of the fighting was cool, but it often became repetitive with the same combos being used. I want to see some explosions, huge energy blast, or buildings being torn apart.
Overall score: 230/500 = 46
I gave you a 3/5
I did like this movie better then your first sprite movie, however just go back to what you did with the sound, and add some better attacks. Also, think about someway you can revolutionize the flash world.
Be Original
I understand you wanna show people that you can do flash movies i think thats kool, but you gotta admitt that we pretty much seen a movie like this with Ryu and Scorpion fighting each other. Another thing speed needs to go into the fighting it was slow and a little boring, the music i liked, you used some of it from Tekken 5 which is kool.
It was ok.
You just need to think of something original.