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AF: Time Slip

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My Fourth Movie. A normal day until the young male slips through time and ends up in the future. Music from Boo Radleys - Wake Up.

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nice i liked it alot

well done nice flash

Bland

A nice idea, and effort obviously went into it... but it was bland. Emotionless. No feeling. The animation was fairly smooth, and for a fourth movie it wasnt so bad. Keep working at it. The music was of a rather low quality. I understood the story well enough. Keep making flash, but most importantly, develop a style. Learn to draw actual pictures... a Wacom tablet might help. If you do that, the sky is the limit...

yea

well im nice ill give you 5/5 but next thing i see from you id better give you a 10/10 im going to be nice no one starts of good ^ _ ^ send message back

jonohomo responds:

thanks for commenting, i appreciate everyones opinions

stinky

The drawings were crude, the man's voice unemotional, and the storyline not clear. I had no idea what was going on or why it was occuring. I thought the song was good though, it seemed to suit the mood.

jonohomo responds:

thanks man, i can take critism. i really try to take into account what other peoples opinions are. i guess other peoples points of view can show you how to improve.

Credits & Info

Views
1,645
Votes
4
Score
2.13 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jul 26, 2007
4:46 PM EDT