No Effort on graphics

The sprites were terrible. It was as if you used the least amount of sprites you could possibly find without actually having to put any effort into.

To choppy

Add in more animation frames! Your gonna need more than 2 frames for walking and running, get some injured sprites in their too. Could've easily been better with just a little more effort. Such as in the scene where they break down the door, they use their WALKING animation to attack. I mean common.

nice

pretty good, i hope the second one will be longer though

well...

It was a cool i dea
but it seemed like
you just typed in bad words to be cool
and also i got hella fucking bored with it
as soon as the busted him out of"jail"
you have a good idea just put more behind it.

Good (I think)

The story need more elaboration and the sprites too but other than that the idea is good, keep it, hope you become better at flash