Thanks for being unique
Thank you for your originality. I hate when first flashes are unoriginal crap hashes of what already exist.
You have a long way to go and listen to alexboy169 and you'll be on your way.
A few suggestions
This could have potential, if you totally revamp your style. I honestly want to see you make this "feature length movie" so I'm going to try to help you here. First off, cut it out with the stupid lines. The "old fashioned" look that you're going for isn't working. Just use dull colors. That will work a lot better. Another Must: Speed Up the Animation! Seriously, your movie needs to move! The animation is so slow it isn't any fun to watch. Also, try to add in some dramatic/creepy background music, something to set the mood a little better. Also, as others have said, you should try to work on the quality of your animation. It isn't a must, but it would really, really help. Just spending a little more time drawing it all out would get you so far...
I am also assuming that there will be some story-line to the finished product, not just watching the reaper run around de-capitating people...
Please, take my suggestions into consideration. I don't do this for everyone. In fact, I usually just tell people that their flash sucks and thats about it. The movie that you say this is a trailer to is something I would really like to see. Please, do it right.
The graphics were terrible, especially that ''film grain'' effect. The flash was boring and slow. Work on your skills before submitting another flash and make them easier to follow and in this case more suspenseful.
this was terrible man
come on you need to work on the graphics
make it a bit more interesting and easier to follow
Please put more effort into your series.
So far the trailer looks pretty dull. And the graphics need a lot of work.