rite....

you said it takes 10 mins, but it takes me more than 10 mins to go to mcdonalds and get a cheeseburger...

and anyway, the layout and everything didnt look that great either, the 'next' button wasn't even in the same place on each frame and the plain white background was boring, not to mention the rubbish spelling. to be honest i'm surprised this didnt get blammed straight away. maybe if you learned to spell and snazzed it up a bit, you might have a half decent flash here, but for now, it needs ALOT of work.

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^^Good Points^^
This has to be one of the strangest pieces of food I've ever imagined. It's got some weird ingredients that probably aren't too convenient, but if I had them I would give it a try.

^^Needs Improving^^
Not that it's a bit deal, but you say you need a cheeseburger...which doesn't make sense, as I would just eat that instead. But anyway, compress your music a bit and maybe add something more graphically interesting.

Cool idea, but not much as a flash

-Good-
I liked your music choice. Your idea with this flash was pretty interesting, I can't see how pizzas and chesseburgers aren't good =)

-Bad-
The bad thing about this was that there was no pictures or animation. It was overall boring because of the black text and white background.

-Overall-
Decent

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Pics would certainly help

This is an interesting recipie. I'm trying to work out this 'vertical line' technique of the application of the ingredients.

A picture for each step which moved, showing any particular actions needed would be useful, so that you can give us the best advisce of how to do these things. A Back button would be good, just in case people do skip over, as would the replay button, but you told us about these already. Please give us a mute button in future productions, as the music is not my thing.

I might have to make this pizza snack thing at some point.

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pretty good

this is a good flash but it could use some pics,and some flash.other than that it was pretty good.