hmmmm not tooo bad.
it was short but it would be a good animation IF it was longer. graphics were pretty smooth.
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Hey everyone, this is the first flash I made myself. A very nice person helped me understand flash and even gave me a portion of his website.
Go check it out! :D
http://www.beyondinsanity .net
http://www.beyondinsanity .net/thumbforyourfinger
(the last one is my part of the site)
Short and sweet.
I like it!
Shows promise...
It wasn't totally horrible, and was actually a bit funny. Still, it was extremely basic. It sort of seemed like a cold opening for something, if anything at all. It was cute, though. I think with a little more time and practice in Flash, you'll definitely be able to make something much better than this.
Good luck in the future
It was short and only contained two characters basically shouting at each other. Graphics, sound, and everything else needs improvement trying making it longer, improving the story. Keep up the practice you might make something worth while, remember flash takes time to create.
Very short!
It was very, very, very (very) short! There wasn´t any enjoyable animations but it´s a start. Honestly, I don´t think this will get thoug the Flash Portal, but keep practicing and maybe you´ll make something very impressing some day!