Aww...
There was a moral after all...
A little bit too choppy and the sound peaked a few too many times for my taste. Also, there wasn't really much of a story line... or humor. I would say maybe try taking an allegorical approach next time. I did like the wrap up in the end though. Just work on the animation a bit more and making things... funny. And not creepy and weird. Like killing emo kids. Remember that every living entity has its place in the Great Circle of Life... even if that place involves being pale, listening to God-awful music, and menstruating. Use your wits, nawt yo' gatz.