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Bunny DressUp

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this is the second attempt of my DressUp ! hope it´s better now i added a few things and hope you like it now ^^ i know that Jenny(the Bunny) isn´t very detailed and the clothes also but thats my style (i´m a noob btw) i have to say thx to all for the reviews so far and if there are still some more things to change just tell me^^ i´ll get better give me just some more time ... and now enjoy my little Game and if you don´t like it (hopefully not) don´t blam me ...it´s my first game and my first time with Flash! thx (i hope there are no problems with the start button!! thats why i needed to delete and fix it .. if not don´t blam me just tell me i´ll fix it as fast as i can!)

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no shoes?

K

^^Good Points^^
The graphics weren't too bad on this one. You have some decent drawing skills, as well as a good enough knowledge to make a game such as this. Seemed to function fairly well.

^^Needs Improving^^
The main thing is that you need to optimize both graphics and audio. There is no way this was optimized, seeing how it was almost 8 MB. I assume most of this comes from the music.

Ugh.. dress ups.

You have to start out somewhere, but dang, everyone knows that, except for a few a VERY FEW number of dress ups dress ups simply suck. No offense, but bunnies? Seriousley couldent you just as easiley have done a person? I would like to see a dress up with buttons, and when you click a button the piece of clothing automatically goes on the person, or thing in this case. And then you can simply catigorise it into different sections. Anyway, average game, what do you expect with a dress up game.

Lacks sparkle, but a solid effort

A decent flash, no glaring flaws, but the lack of experience shows as a lack of sparkle. It's always nice to see variety and diversity here, and your addition of the beak was a good touch; unfortunately it didn't look as good as the other options. Maybe a furry dress-up with more emphasis on the variety of species makeable, or even the gender? The little hats were a nice touch, but perhaps a greater variety of clothing (preppy, punk, hippie, sci fi, fantasy, uniforms, dominatrix, butch, femme, whatever) would also serve you well.
Thanks for your submission to the merciless web, and I hope to see more from you as you learn and grow as a creator!

Prety good

and very cute ^^
try to make more, your on a good start here.

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Jul 12, 2007
8:52 AM EDT