haha

sorry, but that definetly wasn't ur 1st flash, it was good though.
but you really shudn't ploy on people like that so they rate better

nice!

theres no way that was your first time. anyway keep makin more i see good things from u if u work hard

amazing

dude...if this is your first flash...there will be many great things from u in the future.

great

Was this really your first flash? If so you are very talented. Graphics were great, animation was smooth. Only problem was that there was no load-bar/intro-screen but that doesn't really matter.
5/5

you sure this is you first flash?

i mean, this was great - the graphics were very good, and the sound was perfect. the mechanics had some failures here and there, but where fine. the plot was a bit hard to pick up, but once i got on the storyline i could understand it well.
its surprising that this is your first flash, as its such high quality material!

oh, just one thing - put a loading screen (VERY important) and a "restart"/"play again" button (not SO much important)

keep up the good work, youve got a lot of potential!