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StoryGeneratorV1.0

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Hey guys, i know this isnt really a game, and its been redone many times probably a lot better, but need an opinion on it, hope its okay!

dont forget to comment and vote,
cheers

~AdaptedGames~

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so fun

There was a lot of noise coming from outside my house, I looked out of my window to find my worst enemy, bob stuck in a tree. I noticed the fire engine appear from around the corner, the firemen were runing loudly! I looked at the tree again and people were watching others ran from the scene and go back home. I looked back at bob who by now was calling out for their coke which appeared to be more than big. I shut my window after a while and laughed as the big tree was cut down and the firemen drove off.

nice

My favourite trip to the fairground was when I went with my school, my best mate Ryan was dared that he wouldn't go on the skipping ride, which everyone was too afraid to go on. My best mate was fearless and got ready to eating on the carriage and waited for it to start. Then Ryan started to move on the ride, and shouted to everyone to look after his gun. Then he took off out of sight and shot up the big ride. Everyone watched with a big expression on their faces. They were amazed and my best mate was the hero of the day.

Poor.

How does a submission like this have such a high score?? Anybody could have done somthing like this and it couldent have taken you long to do. Nonetheless, the menus looked very nice and was a positive reinfocement on an otherwise crappy game. The only thing, in my opinon that would make this worthy of a score like this if you actually animated the story at the same time, flash is for animating not making paragraphs I could do with books. Poor submission.

picaxis-media responds:

well, i accept your comments, but seems your the only negative response, see newgrounds isnt about who can do what, its about a showcase, improving and learning to an extent, so where i am glad you took the time to review the game, i cant take on board meaningless bragging about YOUR abilities seeing as you are the only person to say anything bad.

Still

Thanks though

Ok

Very cool! Keep up the good work!

fun and easy

Ad libs for New Grounds, pretty good concept not sure I have seen it before on here, so I'll say it's original for NG. Hope you make a v.2

picaxis-media responds:

thankyou :) ill be sure to make a 2nd

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Score
3.56 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jul 9, 2007
4:20 PM EDT