this is me again submitting and this time...well

dude, i think something's wrong wit ur ear AND grammar...wat u wrote soemthings dont make sense and grammar's mostly wrong, same as that Ruby flash u made...this isn't an insult but i think u should go study english some more and come back to make flashes b4 u make grammar errors like this...srry man For those of u who think i am older than him and just bashing him, i am actually turning 14 this year so i would be the same age as him and i'm an asian.i know how he might feel to be bashed but i am not doing this on purpose...ty

Bollocks :]

Well, dont know about others.

But i heard those lyrics pretty damn clearly.

K

^^Good Points^^
Decent song at least. A good tune to listen to.

^^Needs Improving^^
This doesn't make much sense to me. Usually when people make something like this, it's made using a song that has lyrics that are hard to hear. This song was very clear throughout, and your changed words just didn't make sense, or didn't really even sound right. You didn't even change half of the words. Ok idea, but needs a better song to go with it.

Heh

Well, I at least got what you were trying to do with this, I thought it was pretty funny...It would have been cooler if you had done an animation with the subtitles for it instead, but whatever it's still funny.

a 1 for humor coz......

it was so bad i could laugh about it
the sentences make no sense at all....
it aint funny to listen to
sometimes the TEXT does not even come close to what the guy is singing...

try better next time