Decent...

You got some serious potential. Only advice I can think of is spend more time drawing the backgrounds. It seems like you spent all your energy on the characters, and rushed the backgrounds. As it is, they just don't seem to fit. If you drew the backgrounds in the same style as you drew the characters, then this movie would be bad-fucking-ass.

Believe me, I know how it is when drawing an animated characters...and then afterwards have very little energy or patience to spend several hours drawing a background that's only going to be seen for a handful of seconds. Or maybe you just think you can't draw good backgrounds. Trust me, you can.

Okay, enough of my speech.

-T.

great animation

dont cut out all the violence dude!! but that was decent graffix with very smooth animation. sorta futuristic? resident evil style. and i didnt understand the story

Flawed and Worse

First off I would have to say the sound was the best part of the whole thing. No choppiness, overall the sounds quality was ok. Though majority of the sound was music. The animation was lame though, parts were the characters bodies were missing, little detail. Senseless gore wont get you that far. Like Wrong Turn, lost of gore shitty storyline. I would have to say more story, more detail, and better use of sound. Hopefully this is your first or second time making a flash.

It looked good......

It looked good from what I saw but you submitted it in a tiny format. It was really really small. You should resubmit it but make it a hell of a lot biger then it is right now. Other then that it looked like a good flash but I don't really know hard to tell cause everything was so small