It was all right...
The movie was fine, but the blinking text got a little annoying. Either lengthen those up or take them out completely next time.
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Summer boredom has me making flash again. There's not really much of a plot. Planning ahead is not a part of my flash creation process ;)
garrettnotcarrot responds:
will do
Yep
It had no plot, you were right. Also i saw what those things said when it flashed a word.
nice
Overall it was nicely done. But you have to make the tekst stay longer.
The rest was ok! :D
subliminal messages?
I'm not sure if the screens popping up every so often were supposed to be subliminal messages but, I kinda ignored them after a while. The music was okay, I didn't really see the plot or point of it either. Though I gave it a protection point.
The title kinda threw me off, because I thought this would be about a man made of clouds or a superhero who could manipulate clouds or something to that extent.
garrettnotcarrot responds:
there's no real conflict or event in this movie, so there wasn't much for me to base a title off of. sorry about the confusion all the same
I'm not getting the point
To start off, your animating skills are decent, but your drawings need some work. Also the blippy, subliminal message text screens got pretty annoying throughout, so I would suggest in the future if you plan on using those to either get rid of them or to leave them long enough to read (for the most part I have no idea what any of them said).
Other than that your story didn't have much substance to it, but regardless it did exist so I commend you on that. If the plot had been a bit more cohesive this flash would have been much better overall.