Keep working

You got a not that creative theme there, besides your creatures look much like aliens from the alien movies, and I'm real concerned about that, however, even though it's difficult, you can make a great series from this, keep working, just watch out for the details, and try not to fall into the common history we are used to

Aliens!

I love the Aliens series. Great tribute and I'm looking forward to your graphic novel. The only complaint I have is that in your description, it sounded like you had an original epic series up your sleeve but it turns out to be another Aliens story. I found that somewhat misleading - other than that, the flash itself got me excited. You should make another one - less tease, more Aliens. =)

not even interesting

so what you made an alien video that was only about them taking over the world.

As it is...

...There is nothing much to it. I advise you to put it in the Alphas, as you are told in the Notes.

Good but,

the text like 'DENZIENS' and 'ALIENS' was very hard to read. Besides that, nice job.