Ah haha
I loved it... even if it didn't have many scenes. I liked when he pushed him away by the face, that was hilarious. Like i've said before... please come back :)
Author Comments
i started making this animation during class in the computer lab.. i just played around and animated what i was doing before class which was eating oreos.. ended up with the idea of having the character do random actions everytime he pulls out a piece.. sorry i couldn't put any audio on this one.. : )
6.7/10
Good:
The graphics and style were great and I enjoyed that aspect of the Flash. I also like the title of this flash: it's simple yet affective.
Improving:
Well, first of all, it was way too repetitive. Second of all, there was no sound, which you already mentioned in your authour's comments, but maybe some music and sounds could be included next time, because it would probably improve the score of this movie drastically. Sorry if I sounded too harsh in this review.
Overall:
Not bad, but needs audio and needs to be less repetive.
6.7/10
~ Z
Repetitive but stick with it
ShadoWii2 is right, sound could have worked wonders for this film. It was a pretty funny concept for a short, but didn't always deliver. Animations should be altered so that the viewer is certain what they're watching isnt just set to repeat, and perhaps shortened as well. The animation was simple, but added to the overall feeling of the film. So, I give it 5/10... not especially great, but I liked it.
Needs more action and sounds
It was pretty good but all it needs are funnier actions when he pulls a new piece out.
Also sounds could have done it better.
Anyways, this flash below the average so that's why I gave 3/5 to it.
~Shadowii2
is tht on repete or suttin??
its good but it gets boring after a while