nice work

Seems like you put a lot of time into this. Nice going.

" You're the saviour! You are one of a number of people who have helped keep this entry in the Portal!"

Bore-fest

nothing special so why bother. I gave gave a 5 for sound because I like this U2 song.

Keep at it!

Props to anyone who puts forth the effort to make a movie and post it for judgement. With that said, I'll try to be constructive. First, the pacing is extremely slow and therefore you probably lost a lot of viewers before it ended even though the movie was relatively short. The sequence where he used the cardkey was exceptionally painful, for example. Some scenes didn't make foreground/background sense and confused the eye. Try to separate your foreground and characters by differing the line widths or making the color palette stronger for the foreground. Finally, what the heck was with that guy who flipped in the hallway and what was that stuff that sprouted around his feet when he landed (impact marks?)? Check out a bunch of other highly-rated animations or even online cartoons for reference. Keep trying though, if you're interested enough you'll get better with practice.