Awesome.

That was just awesome. The lessons are very useful in life if you're a rogue. The only thing, the transitions. Very annoying after awhile. Use alph or that other shit. I'll teach you if you wanna.

Dub Piece FTW.

Woot! Fun.

This was a fun movie to watch. If you are making another one, you should try to do motion tweens, just send me a message if you need to learn how. It will make your animation look smoother and the characters won't just jump around. Also, you could try putting in sound effects, like a sword slash or something. I liked the screen transitions, like the blur thing when it changed scenes! You should try to compress the music a little bit and the file size should be a lot lower, it takes a long time to load. Other than that, well done!

Nice Kevin :D

You probably know who this is. lol But good job nice to see someone who actually draws there movies.and did a nice job. Only problem was transition man......it was too slow. but edit the file to make it faster then i think you can update your flash. Good job dude.

Started out with a decent theme...

Nice first effort, props to anyone who tries and asks for feedback. I think your background music level was too low, I could barely hear it. I think the story had potential but I don't think you fulfilled it. I like that you tried to do something original though, you could have easily ripped graphics from any game in recent memory. Of course, that would have led to something immediately identifiable for the viewer which might have been a good thing since your execution of the "rogue tips" concept was a little weak. It may have even given more in-context ideas for plot points too. One of the transitions was painfully slow, the first town-to-town one right before they got to the ship. The dialogue... eh, seriously was funny at first but you overused the swearing just for filler and it got old really quick. I could have done without the leet speak and typing shortcuts too. Your story would benefit from an initial scene of the dude actually stealing an apple so you might want to try that.

Fine piece of art (for being the first one)

If this is really your first one, don't worry you're doing just fine. I think it lacked sound effects and some voice acting wouldn't hurt either.

The idea to make it like a lesson was good. I also enjoyed the part in the end where the guard got sliced into two, like in samurai movies. Tho' the rogue having a big sword kinda killed the rogue(ish)-feeling on the dude, so if ya are plannin' on making more of these movies: lose the sword and bring back the dagger.

But don't go getting too cocky, there is still room for much improvement.

-Impressed viewer-