Alright

Your drawings are very good. You have some talent in that department, for sure. Try utilizing your drawing ability in flash, you might find yourself to be a good animator.
The largeness of the pictures seemed a bit over-the-top, as closing the window after viewing was a bit of a challenge. :x
Cool pic, though.

nice

very cool and original. the transitioning was great. it sorta looked like it was made with paint at parts, but w/e. NG needs more of this stuff.

Great!

I liked this! Shows a lot of talent.

Constructive Stuff:
-Smooth the transitions... maybe a fade?
-Apparent gunshot wounds... but no visible guns (nitpicky, I know)
-A little dramatic, subtle music would set the atmosphere!

NIIIIIICE!!!

THIS IS AWSOME KEEP ON MAN I LIKE THE WAY YOU DID THE BEGINNING ITS COOL KEEP ON

cool

very simple- but awesome picture outcome!