There were parts where you wrote something, but the guy said something different. It was still kinda funny, I like the ending the best.
fix the sound
its just too long, I watnched for almost ten minutes and I had to turn it off it was giving me a headache.
I actually liked it overall. i didnt really understand who everyone was but you said it was a fansite kinda thing and people's Screennames. Nice, Good job.
"we could sing... oh wait, we cant sing." xD awesome lol. absolutely awesome xD
sound needs help
Clean up your sound files and try to get them all at the same volume. It sucks to have to turn it down and up to hear it all.