First parkour Flash I've watched! The scenes where the main character's not a stick are awesome, and I wish the whole animation would've kept it like that. The moves are swift, the sketchy sceneries work well in putting focus on the character, and then... that Blah ending? Kinda rushed ending, I feel, and maybe those stick parts were a bit rushed too. If you ever get to revising this and perfecting it it would be awesome to watch. Great work!

-cd-

lol

"oh shit, i gotta work. i'll take a shortcut"

Ummm....

look you really need to download the newgrounds pre loader (go to bbs, flash, read this first topic and then ng preloader and you shouldnt mix sticks and what looks like rotoscoping, it should all be rotoscoped because nobody likes sticks anymore and rotoscoping looks pretty good. anyway that isnt bad for a first flash but you need a lot more practice before you submit to the portal. i dont submit yet =)

good one

hey, that was a pretty nice animation... especially for a first animation as well. this one here had a pretty nice plot behind it, some decent graphics in it, cool audio and it offered some cool and unique entertainment. the only thing it was missing was a pre-loader. i dont really think it was pre se needed though it wouldve made the loading time more tolerable.

Really good

Thats a really good flash, especially for your first one. There are just three small things i would do.

1. Put a preloader on it, a few times it lagged up, i think it was due to the large file size not being completely loaded.
2. Could you make all the stick characters into your parkour peopl? that would be really cool to see, especially the parkour jumping at the start of the movie, down the building.
3. Make the ending a bit better (but then you already said about that)

Other then that, well cool mate.