i dont get how did he get eaten
I think you could improve greatly on this. I agree with the person below me try to get a storyline that was completely random lol. Improve on graphics, add some more color, and definately get a storyline and it'll be good. (Yea and the sound was pretty annoying :P)
yah my other computer with flash isnt working now...so when it does my first thing is to improve on this :).
where do I start
I review most of the flash I watch here because I run a studio and I really like to try to help. Sometimes help isn't that welcome but WTF I try. before you spend all the time animating something ( and I will say you show some promise as an animator) make sure you have a story. this wasn't interesting. It didn't make any sense. If what you love doing is animation, find a friend that can write a story. People come here to be entertained - not to wathch you learn flash.
what was that! i didnt understand any part of that! it just seemed like a practice animation. please try harder. and if you dont want a bad reveiw please give me atleast an honest reveiw.
I know what you all are thinking, I am Greth's brother and I voted a 5 because I am related, I would just like to state that any ratings I give are purely natural as if I did not know the author. Anyway, back to the review: I think that this movie is funny and has some good animation. I would just like to recommend that you make it longer and that it is purely about the money. Good luck Tristan.
hey, I just wanted to say, it's ment to say that if money is USED corectly you still, get put down for it...but I will update it and make it longer :)