I'm not entirely sure what just happened, but i liked it.
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Yay I am finnaly done! Constructive critisimes are welcomed.
Anyways, I didn't get this style from madness infact I got it from my own head one day so no this isn't like madness... Now with that said enjoy the movie :)
I would like to thank Greth-of-d idk why I just want to mention him cause he gave me somewhat of the idea. Also expect a awsome video game to come out till then,
Damn this movie has been through chaos lol, Sorry to those people who watched the wrong one it's fixed now! :)
-Greth-of-choas
huh? :[]
i dont get how did he get eaten
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I think you could improve greatly on this. I agree with the person below me try to get a storyline that was completely random lol. Improve on graphics, add some more color, and definately get a storyline and it'll be good. (Yea and the sound was pretty annoying :P)
Greth-of-choas responds:
yah my other computer with flash isnt working now...so when it does my first thing is to improve on this :).
where do I start
I review most of the flash I watch here because I run a studio and I really like to try to help. Sometimes help isn't that welcome but WTF I try. before you spend all the time animating something ( and I will say you show some promise as an animator) make sure you have a story. this wasn't interesting. It didn't make any sense. If what you love doing is animation, find a friend that can write a story. People come here to be entertained - not to wathch you learn flash.
what!!!
what was that! i didnt understand any part of that! it just seemed like a practice animation. please try harder. and if you dont want a bad reveiw please give me atleast an honest reveiw.
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