too short

to be worth watching. Something you upload should be worth watching in itself. It has potential, its OK sound, animation etc, just not of any actual entertainment value.

Confusing

Was a little confusing, although it's probably just me.

Nice animation none the less!

Keep up the good work!

Uneventful. Nice music though.

I liked the music; absolute favorite in the little animation. But really nothing happened in the animation. Seriously uneventful. I feel like it'll go somewhere, but I'm disappointed. Liked the style, music, animation--but NOTHING happened.

Needs something to happen

It wasn't bad, there were some smooth animations, but nothing happened!

4

I think that there is to much of an ambiguity to what this series could be. Is it an action film? Is this a kid who's going to get violent on his father in the next room? It is neat to have a series, but there should be more to the individual episodes so that you actually want to make a consious effort to catch the next episodes. The animation is okay - but the designs really need to be improved. I hope that your next two installments look a little better. The audio sounds okay, a simple extended loop - I loved that you had an audio pause/play option during the movie but if you pause it an any given time, the song still plays, so for more intregal scenes, it could take away from the added effect that the music brings to an animation.

Ryan