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neat~! would help if u put up a preloader..you can just download it from newgrounds if u dint kno how to make
So this is the first flash I'm uploading here, I made it for my final Grd. 10 art assignment and just wanted to get some feedback on it.
I originally planned it to be around 5 minutes long and deal with how the polar ice-caps melted and then flooded the world ,but i didn't have time for that.
P.S. The music is from sakari-infinity.net encase anyone is interested.
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neat~! would help if u put up a preloader..you can just download it from newgrounds if u dint kno how to make
Preachy.
Ok - first off, logging has much more complex consequences than what is depicted here. Acid rain doesn't kill on contact, but you might have been using artistic license so no biggie.
Error - the water was green in the van sequence of the good outcome.
Please improve your graphics. It just isn't any fun to watch visually. However, it is better than stick figures.
If your going to do an environmentalist movie, people will complain (like I have) if you don't do a little research first. I don't reccomend Wikipedia for this - heck, I don't reccomend making an environmentalist movie, because it is such a complex issue. But thats just the message I'm critiquing here.
Sound was synced well, but there wasn't much of it.
OK
Good animation, and an enviromentish message.
just to simplistic
i get the messege behind it. but it was way too simplistic. if one did go along with the "moral of the story" it doesn't matter because they would be too distracted by the sketchy animation to enjoy the film
this is of course only my own humble opinion
Keep up the good wOrk!!!
i found this flash to be a little "One Sided". I understand what your tring to get at, but cmon. Without industries, then those people wouldnt of even had those signs to protest...
The animation was ok. The ending with the earth smiling was a lil lame. BUT since its your first flash its not all that bad. ALSO... when the "Hydro" car was drving in the "Good" ending. the lake was still green. you should fix that.