mmm nice
Art: awesome
Story: Pretty decent
Camera angles/timing:poor
everything was nice except you delayed alot of things much too much, ie credits, and some other things... just work with those, experiment on quick scenes etc.
Author Comments
Our first Flash movie created as a quick project. It's about cowboys with lazer guns, robots and dinosaurs, so it's to be taken as anything but serious.
Comments and criticism are welcome :)
Amazing drawings
Heyya!
So, a few things:
The credits in the begining are a bit too long.. I thought this was it, and nearly closed the window. Luckily I waited a bit more.
Its quite interesting how you mixed different styles of drawings.
And please swich of the automatic loop :)
All in all its great ;) I really wish all first flashmovies where at least half as good.
Great timeline crossover!
Mixing past and future is interesting to watch, so you made a very original movie! But this can be optimized in filesize, shortening the intro and the credits!
That wuz pretty cool
I loved the art style in here n the metal dinosaur hehe. i really dont think its that short tho but anyway good job.
not bad for a firtst flash!
it was great, but WAY to short. looks like you put forth lots of effort, hich most people dont do around here.