LOL
Why does this have a 2.4? This is great! LOL
A bit short, but I thought it was really funny. The only thing that stopped it from being epic was the too long pauses between dialogue lines. If you shorten those pauses, this is amazing!
Author Comments
ok... i made some changes thanks to the constructive comments of the newgrounds users. I made the opening shorter, enhanced character quality, and gave the background a cartoonie less ordered feel. same movie... minor changed. i hope it doesnt get blammed! but if it does then hey, try try and try again!
and constructive comments ar appreciated!
J0hnnyR0tt3n responds:
Thanks! Keep in mind that this was my first animation ever! lol
hey!
you passed judgement! cool! nice movie!
J0hnnyR0tt3n responds:
Thank you very much!
HAHAHAHA!
That was great! A++!
saw the original version
and thought it was great, but gotta admit, this is better than the original. the voices are a little rough, but still darn good. it really helped that you took out the long nothingness of the beginning. great work, hopefully this time it makes the cut
J0hnnyR0tt3n responds:
thank you... i tried to clean up the voices as best i could, but when your using a cheap mic and a free editing program you cant get your hopes up to high...
cool
normally i dont like short movies but it just worked with this movie. the opening line was so random. i was cracking up. it was like an animated knock knock joke
J0hnnyR0tt3n responds:
thank you very much. random things tend to be really funny... well in my oppinion! haha
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4.20 / 5.00
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- Jun 10, 2007
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