**EDIT**
Alright...I keep getting reviews mentioning length and whatnot, so let me set this straight right now. As I stated before, this is two separate school assignments that I used the same plot for. One called for subtle animation (the first half). The second called for the character to pick up and throw something (the rest of it). HENCE THE LENGTH. I didn't go overboard because I'm a full time student and athlete who couldn't afford to do that seeing as how I do have other obligations.
And just so you know: the character design is a typical one for me; I only mention that the thing is not a flying sperm because some pervy males in class started making comments about it looking like that; and functional stories don't have to be long.
The end.
Excellent
That was pretty good. The graphics and style were superb and the music fit the flash very well. Was that creature on the tree supposed to be a female centaur or something? I thought that this was a very strong flash overall and I hope that you keep making more flashes!
~ Z
~ Review Request Club
Thank you very much for your review! Eh...I'm not really sure what she is...just one of my really, really generic simplified anthro-ish characters that would be pretty easy for me to animate. I had to do the whole thing over in one day due to a file crash and my own stupidity, so she got the role.
I will most definitely continue to animate with Flash! Again, thank you for your interest and time!
K
^^Good Points^^
You definitely got me interested. Hot purple chicks laying naked on tree branches. I can't see what can make a better movie. Very smooth and life-like animation, with cool music to go along with it.
^^Needs Improving^^
I would like to see a full length movie from you. This was entertaining, but still you could make pretty good movies if you applied yourself.
Review Request Club
Thank you very much for the review! School, unfortunately, doesn't tend to give enough time to make assignments very long until you get the senior classes. I'll be uploading another (short) project soon and I'm working on a longer one, but I've put it on hold because I've got a job doing Flash stuff for a pretty big company, so my own stuff gets put on the back burner for now.
Once again, thank you very much for your review! I hope you view and enjoy my work in the future.
A good start.
So, you've shown us that you can use flash neatly, complete with Manga-esque drawing techniques.
I think you'd do well with this flash, if you decided what would happen next and take this further. Maybe add sound effects and of course some plot, as the drawing and animation techniques and style work well, so good work on that.
I'm intrigued to see what you'd do with this character, though you could have used something different that something that looks (by your own admission) suspiciously like a flying sperm, as it may raise slight concerns (along with my eyebrows)
[Review Request Club]
Thank you for the review, but as I mentioned in my original comments, this flash was done for two very specific assignments-subtle and dynamic animation (as explained in my new comments). It was my first opportunity to work in any medium I wanted, so I chose something I had never done-flash. As far as my choice of style in this assignment, time commanded me to use simple, efficient character designs...which is important to animation regardless. This happens to be the style that is simple and quick for me, and perfect for an assignment that I have one week (or one day when my file crashes right before the deadline) to complete.
The plot will not be extended since it was solely for use in the assignments, but I will try creating plots for this character in the future.
And as for the flying sperm. I did NOT see it as that when I created this. Some guys in my class called it that, which makes me a)want to change it and b)make sure everyone knows that's not what I was going for.
Thank you again for your thorough review. Your input is helpful and much appreciated.
Very nice.
A bit short, but good. The animation looks very smooth, and the character's face is very expressive despite its simplicity. Sound quality is good and fits well with the flash. This one should definitely be extended into a longer flash. 4/5
Thank you for your input. Unfortunately I will not be extending this flash because the plot is specific to the assignments this flash was made for. I may consider doing another flash in this setting with this character, though, since many people are suggesting I extend the length of this one. Again, thank you!
I impatiently await more submissions!
I really liked this. Short, sweet, and to the point, and the music fit perfectly. I think I'm going to add this to my favorites, I really did like it a lot. Keep up the great work!
Thanks a lot, I'll continue to try my best.