This is just a short video I did before starting on my latest cartoon project. The characters featured in this video will be seen in my upcoming cartoon show. You can find out more about it at ChieftainWilson.com and Myspace.com/ChieftainWilson, I'd appreciate it if you gave them a look and let me know what you think of the video.
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^^Good Points^^
Well, I didn't think it was really that terrible. The characters were neat, as they were pretty unique and had a personality to them. Storyline was pretty funny. I would like to see an extended version.
^^Needs Improving^^
Without any voice overs or sound effects, this really just feels distant to watch. Feels like I'm missing out on a part of the movie or something.
Awful im afraid.
This movie wasn't good at all. The music was good but there was no humor and no dialog what soever. The graphics were ok but still you need to add some jokes and dialog or some vilolence. Still this series has some potensial
Pleas finish it before you submite...
You need to finish it, i was starting to like it and it sudenly finished, i liked the music but there were no dialogues, no trama and no humor.
Try writing some jokes then the story, then do a story board and then put it on flash.
Good Luck next time.