Don't get me wrong, I liked it, but...
There is no way this will make it through the portal. You are really talented, and I can see that, but this kind of thing just really has no feet to stand on in the NG community. Please, PLEASE, continue to make flashes. Just don't do them on Shakespeare.
In a world where people actually read Shakespeare, this would get a five. But, unfortunately, I'm pretty sure this will not pass unless on craftsmanship alone.
I applaud the effort, just the topic was weak. Again, you are incredibly talented, and I want to see more from you.