Stiff and tweened looking.

Hnoestly, that looked so stiff and tween it hurt.

UM [KK] membarssszs

Even though I support the KK (and I'm a member), the author is right about his last responce to a KK member. The author's flash may not be original, but we don't have the right to bitch about something that was actually decent and that the author spent quality time on. And he is right, some of our flashes are spam, and this cartoon, for absolute truth, was not spam. It was better than most of the stuff we release.

So... all fellow KK members: CHILL THE FUCK OUT!

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Graphics: 4, the drawings were decent but the animation consisted mostly of tweens. The lines of the drawing were much too thick to make the viewing experience pleasurable to the viewer's eyes and the edges of the background looked rushed. However, the weapon drawings were decent, as were the clown drawings.

Style: 2, there was nothing in the content of this flash that deemed it to be original or refreshing. Although a decent concept, the execution of it seemed rush and there was one single 'camera angle' or view used. For the viewer to be maintained the whole time, there has to be a mix of close-ups and far-away shots.

Sound: 3, while the music was decent by itself, I felt that it was not the right type of music for the flash. The sound effects were irregular and there was a lack of consistency of using the same sound.

Violence: 5

Interactivity: 0, not applicable.

Humour: 0, not applicable.

Overall it had some good points, but it needs room for improvement. It brought nothing new to Newgrounds. Perhaps try making different types of flashes to build up a good portfolio.

A++ WORK

i loved it it was a good rip-off of animator vs animation but still a very good movie make more