Would be better as an animation.

Not bad but i was expecting a flash animation and not a video. A vid in fla format isn't a flash animation just as a midget in a TV box inst a TV. The idea is of quality but the video is dark and its hard to see some of the video. If higher ratings is what you seek try taking the idea and making it into a flash animation. Drawing characters and such isn't too hard it just takes a bit of practice. Any tutorial on the collections page would prove useful for if you need assistance. Good luck on future submissions.

~Dna

Greatly interesting movie!

The acting's awesome, but the graphics sometimes were dark and harsh. I'm sure you're cool actors, but you'll need a better filming quality to promote yourselves as actors!

Wrong site for this kind of submission

This film clip does not belong on NewGrounds. And even if it did, it was too dark, too shaky and had really poor sound. The dialogue was non-existent and the acting needs serious improvement.

I Like It But....

It was good no dought about that its just some parts were to dark and you could barely see so maybe a little bit more light, and when the people get shot you could but put some animated blood or even fake blood spurting out as too the people getting shot just fall down. I voted 5 but i still say you try improving but, keep trying at this