lol lol

Lol, nicly done.

hum...

this one make me not happy... He was so cut before.... oiuin!

Good, but not much point.

The flash, as with all kinjo kids strips, was above average.

However, like some strips, this one lacked point. The flash was short and did not have much point. I realize that this story wil be continued in the future, but you should put two flashes together instead of seperating them into pointless pieces. This way the viewer is interested in each one instead of the series as a whole.

Anyway, Good job and keep up the good work -L1ght-Speed-