WoW
Yeah that was rather interesting and cool at the same time the only thing this actually lacked was a little sound to go with it. Adding sound and elaborating a bit would be an improvment you could add some buttons to advance text to smooth this a little more and you would really have something.
Here is an idea why not make a larger movie one that contains a menu leading to different types of trauma done in this style with a little sound and such as mentioned above I think it would turn out really good.