This is my first work on newgrounds.com,it started off as a hubby but grew into a short movie,any criticism will be most welcome,i will especially appreciate any advice on voice synching
very nice for a first shot
ive seen alot of first tries on newgrounds even though i only created my account today, and i can say that its one of the best first flashes that i have ever seen... brush up on the sounds and make the speaking more synchronized with the mouth and we may, after some extra experience with fluent animating, have a front-page flash. good work
4
Excellent debut!
The repetition and low quality of some sounds were the only thing to replace, but still the movie's great! I'll wait the second part!
Not bad
That was good for you first movie, the way it was done that shows me you took time in doing it which is a good thing the sound wasnt all the great but meh for you first time not bad keep up the work
4/5
- Shawn
Not bad but room for improvement
It's show's that you put time into your flash. And while there is room for improvement it's not bad for your first flash submitted. I liked the different style of animation. Though I think you should work on your character animation, and design. To give them a more realistic look (example - the dead guard lying on the ground could look better). Also your frame rate could use some speeding up. Example being the helecopter piloet talking, or when Knox is talking to the cheif the movement (blinking, talking) is slow. Your sound FX were good. But you should up the vocal level's being as in some part's you can't really hear the people talking over the background music. For the background music it was well displayed, but repetitive. A way to find some good background music is in the Music Portal here on Newground's they have just about every type of music you could think of. Overall for a first submission this is a decent flash. I look forward to seeing the next episode in the series (if you have chosen to make it) and the improvement's to come.
that was good
for your first flash but it has too much detail for a beginner and it wasn't so great to begin with either
when doing lip syncing do the voices first and the as you animate them picture what the words will look like as if someone was talking and have it sped up by changing the fps
the helicopter looked cool but the propellers werent moving that much and the guys arm was realy small
start out next time with just a simple flash and not alot of detail but after doing it a while youll become better and then you can make alot of detail like some of the sieres on newgrounds