I didn't care for this because I didn't understand it. I mean, it was just a guy getting hit over and over. Slapstick is good, but there's not much else. There needs to be more characterization. Maybe my computer is just slow. The music is quite nice.
I heard that Knox's film "Villain" was never finished or made or something. It seemed to have potential. I think your style is pretty unique. I could have sworn Knox made this himself. You may have just copied his style done well.