Not bad but...
The guy before me is right.
Graphically the movie was very weak. The only good graphic was the loading bar. Perhaps, if you had drawn the shape better and done anything in the background it would have improved.
The sound was very weak and the microphone you used cracked repeatedly. It needs to be recorded better and saved as a higher quality file.
Therefore, stylistically I think the submission was very weak.
While, it could have been both funny and disturbing (for good reasons) I think it lacked significantly in certain departments.
I'm being generous with a 4
I will use this to scare small children.
THIS IS FUCKING AWSOME!!!!!!!
More like it please!