the ending was great!
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The funny parts in this cartoon lacked humor. You know, the stuff that makes babies laugh and old people poo themselves in delight. Your animations were good enough, but since the dialogue was about as entertaining as reading a phonebook, I'd have to suggest hiring someone known to be other (other than your mom) to write your jokes. FTW.
it was good..
it was good but, like scb said the cheek going into a point thing....no good. and the jokes were kinda lame, but! id like 2 see more!
that was some pretty good drawing/animation, but i have a few things to point out- the way rude boys cheek came in at a point that didnt connect made it look bad, i sometimes noticed that an pupil would slip below the white part of the eye, and the overlapping looked really cheap.
the worst part of this was the humor. i heard an un-godly amount of jokes that had already been used to death. you really need to have someone help you out with that, because honestly, that made the flash unbearable.
The animation looked good, it did, smoothly tweened stuff, nicely done, but the humour, where was it? Seriously, i'm sure you guys can conjure up some funny..
If you want some advice, remove the overlapping lines, they look ugly (if you dont know what i mean, check out your character that has glasses, the singing one, and check his nose, the nose line hangs over the rim of his glasses, looks like a rush job), other than that, work on some funny script, maybe make the facial features more distinct too.
But seriously.... fun-ny.. thats all you need, but its the hardest thing to get, i hope my review helped.