heres a good idea(seriously)

make lots of these and then make a giant flash with scene select or play all so you can see all episodes at once! anyway, just wok on ur artwork a BIT more . so yaaaa

lol

graphics and animation were kinda lame but the story was hilarious. next time spend maybe a little more time on the graphics and animation to keep your viewers a little bit more entertained. good flash i expect to see some improvements on flashes you make in the future.