you can call me , "saviour"
for a school project, it wasnt half bad! background music was ok, but u couldve had voices speaking over the music , also.....rainbow shirt?
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This was my final exam for my technology class in high school. I was a little rushed on the sound, so the musik is out of sync and cuts off at the end. I KNOW THIS. I'll go back and fix this eventually.
Ninja-Spoon responds:
Yes, rainbow shirt. I happen to like rainbows, and will be using rainbow shirts often with this style of character. I suppose it might become something to recognize me by. Or maybe I'm just too lazy to think of something better. Who knows. As for the music, I know, it sucked. But I was rushed as the teacher was telling me to add it as a last minute thing and the classical was all I really had. I'm probably gonna go back and fix it (if I stop being so damn lazy). (Pardon my language)
Anywho, thank you for critiquing. In any case, I'd say you were quite generous in your critique, and I thank you for that as well.
Uhm.
Wow.
For a school project, that was good.
For a flash that you asked me to watch, that was scarey
For improvements add voices. I know you have a mic, and i know you have a voice. You also have friends who have voices.
Oh, and awesomeness on th poke and go moo. Cya! ;)
Ninja-Spoon responds:
Yes....Wait until we meet again. I will poke YOU and say MOO! HAHAHA!
Anyway, another generous critique. My, people can be very nice on here, can't they? (If only you were this nice in person...)
well....
i dont have much 2 say about this one
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