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Stone Cold

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For my Economics class i had 2 make a commercial for beverage my team named stone cold and I wanted 2 get commentary from people out side my family and freinds

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Comical.

>Well, graphics weren't exactly amazing, but I have definitely witnessed some atrocities, and this wasn't one. The style and Humor gave this piece some points, but lost some for sound and graphics.
>Having said that, I loved it. Partly because the comedy was thought out, partly because its a spoof on some drink commercials, but mainly because I can actually see this turning into a commercial ad. All in all, not a bad job.

Sa'll right... I suppose

well this aint the best thing ever butttttt, for such a crappy product u did purdy gewd

Its fine... just fine...

I mean... i cant call it great neither... But I dont exactly hate it... Its just fine... average to be exact.

Eh

It's alright. Some slight spelling errors, no biggie.

The filesize is really big for such a short movie, and the first music doesn't seem to fit it very well, but I don't see any huge problems with it.

Hope this is the rough draft.

If this is for you economy class, I'd look it over. There's multiple grammar errors, hard-to-read text, and some innapropriate music. Plus, you don't need "Boy:" when we can see the person who is talking, and his mouth is moving. Overall, below par.

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Uploaded
May 21, 2007
9:28 PM EDT