I decided to review this one, over your first one
Great series. I understand that you are relatively new at this, so your graphics aren't going to be very great. But you have a talent. Yes, it could have been longer, and more visually stunning, but it was still great. Maybe in a year or 2, you could come back and re-animate (lol i made a pun) this series, and maybe make it longer and maybe even having a prequal, or a sequal.
Like I said, you got talent. Trust me, if you keep working on Flash, you'll be great some day.