nice job
graphics- nice but could have been a little better.
style-very nice!
sound- good quality and considering you made it yourself great!!
violence-none
interactivicy-theres a play button.
humor-none.
nice cartoon test thing.
keep it up!
Author Comments
Alright, this is the drill for my graduation project. The show is called Surf and Sand. All the music was written by myself, and I decided to create the drill in Flash. Might as well get some feedback here too :)
If you choose to comment, please comment about the music as well as the drill!
Thank you! Have a good day!
lunaTredecim responds:
Thanks for the review! Yeah, the marchers were decidedly low quality; that's just to save space. Four decent-quality music files makes for a fun-sized flash!
Greatness
i liked it but it didn't like the music but other then that it was great!
lunaTredecim responds:
Wow, that's the reverse of the other reviews! :p Thanks much for the review!
Cool Drill
Although I doubt many people who aren't in a marching band or color guard would really appreciate this flash, I thought it was really cool, i have never seen drill done in flash before so very nice work. The only flaw I saw was there being a lot of times where dots combined and were in the same spot... Love the sailboat entry and exit and the spelling out of SURF AND SAND... This would be a cool show to do. great work and happy graduation
lunaTredecim responds:
Heh. Drill-writing software, $400. Flash, free! Yeah, I know of the dot problem; that would be a follow-the-leader, but I don't have time to fix it; presentation night is THURSDAY!
NO point?
Interesting but it really didn't have a point. I honestly watched the whole thing with the hopes that you were going to make a giant penis with the dots or something. The music made it ok but i honestly don't see how one can enjoy this unless they are on acid.
lunaTredecim responds:
Considering this may be our band's field show in two years, I don't think I could get away with doing a penis. But thanks anyways!
Interesting
The movie was cool; I didn’t quite get it though. The music was very good! Also, the fact that you made the music makes it all the better, good luck with other movies you might be making, and have a good graduation ;)
lunaTredecim responds:
Thank you very much! And yeah, I need all the luck with movies; this is my second to pass! The movie is the drill charts tweened for movement.