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crazyjump (beta)

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THE GAME WILL NOT WORK RIGHT IF YOU RIGHT CLICK>PLAY IT BEFORE IT LOADS.


THIS IS NOT FINISHED YET.


This edition only has 12 levels in all. Its a fun game but do you think I should keep working on it (making the graphics better, adding levels, etc?)


PLEASE give me feedback. That is the main thing I want here.

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not bad

i'm not really one to talk since i don't have any flashes myself but ill list any places that could be improved . the platforms will move out from under you if you stand still. in world to you get a password which is unnecessary since all you have to do is click options to go to world eight. world ten can be rather hard since the platform moves so fast. if you right click play in world one it takes u to world two. the platforms can out run you and cause you to fall.

Pretty good start for a beta action platformer

Overall I thought it was pretty good. The controls felt solid and easy to handle. The platforms could use a bit of polish, but we all know that graphics don't make the game ;)

However, the platforms move a bit fast compared to the character, so it's hard to hit some of the jumps. Also, having the option to restart a level (just in case the player falls into the abyss) may also help. Additionally, I think you may want to make the collision detection a little less "generous." I found myself finishing levels with the robot nowhere near the goal.

Otherwise, I think it's a pretty good start for an action platformer. :)

one main thing you should change

on the levels with the moving platforms, if you try to stand still on the platform it will move out from under you. You should change it so the character moves with the platform. Other than that, like the user before me said about the coins and everything would be good, you could even include like an upgrade system where you get like 5 coins to jump higher or move faster to keep up with the platforms. good submission though

eh

well yea fell nothing happened and when i clicked options the game started but it looks like something i would play if i had nothing to do and the reward was chocolate add some enemies if there arent any i didnt get far lol and you should add like coins you can get besides the star that if you get enough of you can buy like extra lives and like level skips pretty god for a first try though and graphics were cool.

Good

Hmm, on World 2, 2nd Stage, I fell down and nothing happenned XD. I had to close it :p. It's pretty good for a first game =)

thebeaglecartoons responds:

thanks. yah im a lot better at makming animations than games..

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May 14, 2007
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