not bad got a good message going on there... one thing i think you meant adoption not abortion when it mentions about the kids at the end
Need more work.
The idea is totaly good. I hate when girls does discusting thing like cheating there boyfriend or husband or whatever. I thing it's good to tell everyone and try to stop them. then life will be better. For the rest, you need more work on your animations, like the characters graphics, specialy for the girl. She don't have the shape on a woman. With kick-ass graphics, Your flash could be on front page. don't give up the good work...
dude if you want ti improve it buy better flash or
Go to flash tutorials on newgrounds dude practice your flash k. Why do you think alot of people get blammed for there movies but yours was a three.
Batting average: 3.28 / 5.00 (B+) I dont think you need improve this movie is awesome
oh and that storyline is lame.