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Time Range (uni project)

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This is the result of my final year project at Liverpool John Moores University. My project was to Make my very first game in flash, submit it to a website and see how it fairs. However, due to unforeseen difficulties, I was unable to complete the final 2 levels of the game. Any and all reviews are appreciated and will go towards my conclusion.

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awesome...

only for the the music. everything else sucked. but you could make better very easily.

Music was good

Everything else stunk. You didn't even draw anything yourself. Did this take about 4-5 minutes?

3 because it kept me amused for about 60 seconds.

Not bad.

Not bad for a first flash game. I'm in high school, but I could make a similar game better than that, but that's only because I have lots of experience. The graphics could have been better, on, well, everything. Instead of tracing bitmaps for the background you should have taken some time and made your own. It would look much better. Also, the targets should have movie clips integrated into them. ie: the dinosaurs could be walking/flying. Otherwise it was pretty good for a first game.

LJMUJ responds:

tell me about it, I looked at the static targets and felt they were really cheap. I really wanted to animate them but I fell ill and ran out of time to create it. once my course is over i intend on redoing the game from scratch and implement everything from my original design.

Definately has potential

I see good things for this game. but i think you should make the objects move more smoothly and animate them if possible

Not bad really...

I liked this game, but I think if you had added a few things it would have made it much better, I'm going to list them off. (And no, I don't expect any game to have all these features, but I'll list them anyway)
1. Store: Some kind of store to buy new weapons would be awesome, in that same vein, having ammo would be cool too just to add onto the store.
2. In stead of things exploding when you shoot them, I think it would be cool if there was some type of animation to show where they got shot.
3. Death animations are always awesome.
4. Reloading, the fact that you don't have to reload kind of took me out of the game a little.
5. In stead of things taking one hit to kill, what if there were less of then and they just took more than one shot?

That's my 5 cents. Take it as you will. Good game none-the-less.

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May 10, 2007
12:57 PM EDT